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Firestorm
Posts : 53 Join date : 2012-09-13
| Subject: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 8:42 am | |
| Name:Thunder Gender:male Colors:white and red Territory:mountain Picture:no picture currently available, so I'll have to explain:his wings are light blue with claws on the tips. His arms and legs look as if they belonged to a man in armor. Up to the back of his head to his long tail, it is covered in spikes. Spikes are Around his shoulders and the rest of the white spikes are on his arm, with two red ones hiding under, and red spikes on his head. He has red like gems covered on his body. On his forehead chest arms aroun his neck around his shoulders and all around Personality:he is very mean, stubborn territorial and sometimes nice, but 1% chance he'll be happy ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rider ~~~~~ Name:Baird Gender:male Picture:no picture currently available, but go look up his name on gears of war three. That's what he's gonna look like Race:human Personality:nice caring determined and stubborn
Dragon ~~~~~~ Name: sreath Gender:female Colors:black but in light she looks purple and at night she looks black Picture:hard to describe. Personality:Stubborn protective and caring for her rider
Last edited by Firestorm on Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:18 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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Scilene Admin
Posts : 107 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:29 am | |
| there is only a few things you need to change. Dragons connected with riders, don't have territorys, also cave is not a territory. | |
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Firestorm
Posts : 53 Join date : 2012-09-13
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:53 am | |
| The first one is wild and what would qualify as a territory? | |
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Scilene Admin
Posts : 107 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:16 am | |
| Oh the first one. X3. Rides are not master of the dragons. They are a 'part' of them, like an extension of each other. Also a territory is one of the for parts. There is the ocean cliff territory, the mountain territory, the desert territory, and the ocean cliff territory. | |
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Firestorm
Posts : 53 Join date : 2012-09-13
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:17 am | |
| I didn't know what to call them sorry ima edit | |
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Scilene Admin
Posts : 107 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:21 am | |
| It is cool, no problem. c: | |
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Firestorm
Posts : 53 Join date : 2012-09-13
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:22 am | |
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Scilene Admin
Posts : 107 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:33 am | |
| :3 Yup, Approved do you want your color, wild dragon or dragon rider? | |
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Firestorm
Posts : 53 Join date : 2012-09-13
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:34 am | |
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Scilene Admin
Posts : 107 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Making a creation Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:58 am | |
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